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Can someone help me finish this?

@Joe-A said in #1:
> CHESS
>
> chess everyday
> took my focus away
> everynight i stay
> i play while i lay
>
> i can't find the mate
> i need to concentrate
> it makes me frustrate
> everytime i hesitate
>
> my time ticks away
as i checkmate anyway-YuVaNs_J
either way-Me-YuVaNs_J
i won!-Me-YuVaNs_J
YuVaNs_J=Me
Dude, a Sufi master told me that in Istanbul ... so, I'm not surprised it's over your head ... it's probably over everybody's head ...
Would suggest switching "I play while I lay" to "I lie while I play" , or even "every night I play" (unless the sexual overtones are intentional)
@Joe-A said in #1:
> CHESS
>
> chess everyday
> took my focus away
> everynight i stay
> i play while i lay
>
> i can't find the mate
> i need to concentrate
> it makes me frustrate
> everytime i hesitate
>
> my time ticks away
Don't play too much, even I was facing the same problem at a certain point of time,i took a short break on the advise of @shadow1414 which was quite helpful
@Joe-A said in #1:
> CHESS
>
> chess everyday
> took my focus away
> everynight i stay
> i play while i lay
>
> i can't find the mate
> i need to concentrate
> it makes me frustrate
> everytime i hesitate
>
> my time ticks away

nice poem. You might just become a poet!!!!

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